Monday, August 11, 2008

this was d first one and d most special one.....

The instant i saw her, she felt like a rose...

everything around me, simply froze....

her eyes were majestic, her lips were cold,

her face was angelic, my breath i couldn't hold...

i could have told....

I noticed her everyday, never allowed my emotions to have a say...

she fascinated me, but i wasn't too bold...

i could have told...

I waited for the moment, i tried real hard...

never allowed my emotions to take gaurd...

she always felt like a dream when she walked in the cold...

i could have told...

I waited too long, realised she was gone...

i was left with nothing, except to mourn...

i cried my heart... i cried my soul...

now i know...

i should have told...

4 comments:

Rebel Raised by SATAN himself said...

nice to see ur blog!!!...

itss a suppaaa poemm... i love ur writing.. please continue!!

bradsunny said...

u touchd my heat bro.... too gud

Unknown said...

i love dese lines
:)
niceeee re reallly niceee

Anonymous said...

Speechless !!!