Tuesday, September 2, 2008

When I......

Your smile as bright as a ray of sunlight...
your face so angel like...
that twinkle in your eye...that lingers right through...
when I fell in love with you...
The sound of your laughter...which makes music so pale...
your talks which..in my mind leave a trail...
was I dreaming...or my dream came true...
when I fell in love with you...
With every breathe I take...I wish you were here...
to be with you...show how much I care...
I was so dazed...didn' t know what to do...
when I fell in love with you...
I am not asking you...to nurture the same...
if I am not the one...I wont blame...
I'll pray for your happiness...but I won't bid adieu...
I'll be waiting...
because...
I fell in love with you...

4 comments:

Unknown said...

nice muddhar
realllllllyyyy niceee

Rebel Raised by SATAN himself said...

Jaspreet Singh is a benchmark! and this poem lives up to it...

but jassi bhai arent u gettin a lil direct ;)

bradsunny said...

again... 1 of ur finest stuff... loved it

arvinkaur said...

heya bro, seems u hv nva gone thru a break-up...
d way yew write ur poems...dey r really showin ur optimism..
sucha kewl n lyvly appraoch !! full f lyf..